Monday, July 2, 2012

CJ Barrymores

Today we went to a awesome place called CJ Barrymores. It was so fun. Let me tell you about our day. It started on the highway at 11 o'clock. There was so much traffic, due to construction. Luckily, we got through it! When we got there, we went to the front desk. We looked at the schedule board of all the things there were. Just guess where we went first? We used our silver card for bungee jumping! When I started jumping, I started doing backflips in the air! It felt so cool. I wish N could do it to, but she was scared and  watched me. N also took some pictures. After bungee jumping, we went to the cars. I beat N! Her car went slower then mine. So seriously I won, but I was fun to do it. I zoomed like a rocket! Then, I think we went to laser tag, but my foot kind of hurt. I was actually okay, it just hurt a little bit. I guess I was a little sore. And N won at laser tag. She was good. Good job N! We also did bumper water boats and also water wars. We shot water balloons at each other, it was a big soaking fun! Then, we went home after a big fun day. Let's not forget we also got chunky ice! So good. They are like ice pellets. Then, we went home and played scrabble and trouble. Idk who won those, but it was fun. Also N getting married! Yeah! Horray for N! What a fun time! I hope it's ☁☀ partly cloudy, with some sun. That would be nice weather. Good choice N.  Also it's almost 4th of JULY!. Fun fun fun. And we are BFF's and we are going to have a awesome summer! We need to play more TENNIS! SI'm going up north to Mackinaw, but i'll miss my BFF, but I'll see her soon! ☀☁ in Mackinaw! Yeah! Wish everyone good luck. Great writing Veronica. Always, remember to capitalize proper nouns. Like (CJ Barrymores) I love how you add a lot of detail to your writing. It makes the reader feel like they are actually in the story. I had a blast today and I can't wait for Thursday! What will our day ahead hold? :) Love, N

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